Comments on: So Very Disappointed http://www.commonties.com/blog/2007/07/04/so-very-disappointed/ Listen to stories on anything from honeymoons to WWII, from award-winning journalists to first-time writers alike, from anywhere in the world. Fri, 30 Jul 2010 14:36:16 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.0.4 by: Pride Ebile http://www.commonties.com/blog/2007/07/04/so-very-disappointed/#comment-24784 Sun, 08 Jul 2007 09:17:21 +0000 http://www.commonties.com/blog/2007/07/04/so-very-disappointed/#comment-24784 there is some thing about your story that i love so much....mad Aunt. that is the way you use her to reach the climax of the story and resolve it at once. most don't know how to in such short stories. i love it there is some thing about your story that i love so much….mad Aunt. that is the way you use her to reach the climax of the story and resolve it at once. most don’t know how to in such short stories.
i love it

]]> by: m http://www.commonties.com/blog/2007/07/04/so-very-disappointed/#comment-24749 Sat, 07 Jul 2007 17:33:35 +0000 http://www.commonties.com/blog/2007/07/04/so-very-disappointed/#comment-24749 I love Corey. Thanks so much. You write about hope most poignantly. I love Corey. Thanks so much. You write about hope most poignantly.

]]> by: Court http://www.commonties.com/blog/2007/07/04/so-very-disappointed/#comment-24636 Thu, 05 Jul 2007 22:35:56 +0000 http://www.commonties.com/blog/2007/07/04/so-very-disappointed/#comment-24636 Nice. A complicated situation well-articulated. I wish I had sister like that at my wedding. Although I would have wanted her to say what the Aunt said - before the vows were made. The motive would have been different, and quite appropriate for me - ha. One woman's bane is another man's wish. Good short. -Court Nice. A complicated situation well-articulated. I wish I had sister like that at my wedding. Although I would have wanted her to say what the Aunt said - before the vows were made. The motive would have been different, and quite appropriate for me - ha. One woman’s bane is another man’s wish. Good short.

-Court

]]> by: David http://www.commonties.com/blog/2007/07/04/so-very-disappointed/#comment-24622 Thu, 05 Jul 2007 20:45:18 +0000 http://www.commonties.com/blog/2007/07/04/so-very-disappointed/#comment-24622 Violet: In was glad someone spoke up, which is the sharing partof the story for me.... we've all been in situations where we wished someone would do something and no one does...I also like the affirmation that Mitch was a good choice by him making Juliet laugh. Violet:

In was glad someone spoke up, which is the sharing partof the story for me…. we’ve all been in situations where we wished someone would do something and no one does…I also like the affirmation that Mitch was a good choice by him making Juliet laugh.

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