Comments on: He Said, She Said

by: Denise

Tue, 29 Jan 2008 15:42:37 +0000

Your writing is very good and your story is captivating. However, I too doubt its credibility. The chance that you would be on the same train, at the same moment, and hear this confession are too slim.

by: mike g

Sun, 13 Jan 2008 02:38:59 +0000

well now the games people play.To say one pulled the wool over someone else’s eyes to say the least.Harrasement does happen in a workplace where it is hard to fire someone.
This being said,someone going out of their way to cause an other worker harm with lies is equally wrong.
There are many forms of harassement,making snide remarks about a co-worker loud enough for the co worker to hear.
I once worked in a government job as an entry level employee.There was a woman and her friend who would make remarks about someone who had a problem and these women verbally haressed this employee what about Tim one would say,ther other would say he walks funny.Then they both would giggle like a couple of children,this went on day after day untill Tim quilt in discust over the treatment he was getting at the hands of the two women.It turns out that Tim had one leg slightly shorter that the other one,and he could not walk standing strait,so the women made fun of that defect.

by: Jamie

Fri, 11 Jan 2008 13:12:28 +0000

First of all the probability that you would take the very same train at the same time, sit at just the right distance not to be seen but to hear and she reveal that specific information is unbelievable. Even how you handled the situation seems suspect. I am not sure this is a real story but judging from the site format one id left to think so. Good intention but plot lacks believability to me at least. Now if you said you were Charlotte revealing the outcome then wow.

by: Lisa

Tue, 08 Jan 2008 15:21:07 +0000

By the end of this story I had my hand over my mouth in shock. I can’t believe how this woman took advantage of you, your concern, and the situation. It still shows you are a good and caring person…don’t ever lose that quality. This story was very well written and drew me in as if I were a part of it. Thank you for sharing!